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My cat
Apr 28, 2007 12:26:10 GMT -5
Post by thieflord15 on Apr 28, 2007 12:26:10 GMT -5
Name: Blacky Age: 5 moons Gender: she-cat Clan: Kittypet Rank: kit Apperance: black, with white paws and face. Personality: shy, nice. History: none. (sorry I'm really bad at this)
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My cat
May 8, 2007 20:07:08 GMT -5
Post by -- .WillowStar *x on May 8, 2007 20:07:08 GMT -5
Lol, that's okay! I'll give you some tips though, to help you make this bio better:
Be creative! Try to make sure the personality, description and history are all at least 3 lines long. Add more about what type of cat she is, what her eyes are like and what her past is. For example: She's a kittypet right? So tell us what she thinks about her life and how she lives now. Make it interesting!
By the way, I'm not entirely sure what you had in mind here. I mean, you posted this bio in the RiverClan bio boad, but this kitty is a kittypet. Did you want her to become part of RiverClan later on? Or did you not have anywhere else to post this bio? Either one is okay, it's just my brain seems to be getting smaller with every math class I take, so go easy on me :]
ANYWAY!! Just fix things up a bit, make them longer and much more descriptive, and I'll ACCEPT this bio ASAP! OKAY!?!? AWSOME!!!!!
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My cat
May 8, 2007 20:26:33 GMT -5
Post by ~.~ScorchedClaw~.~ on May 8, 2007 20:26:33 GMT -5
ummm.... yea like if u make your profile at least have a like 4-5 sentence like explaining the details of her pelt,flank,face,ears, feet,tail, etc.
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