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Post by shadow on May 1, 2007 18:45:15 GMT -5
Name:Shadowclaw
Age:20 moons
Gender:Female (girl)
Clan:Shadow Clan (SC)
Rank:Deputy
Appearance:Shadowclaw has a black body and a gray line down her back.Shadowclaw has white paws.The tip of her tail is white.She has ice blue eyes and eyes are very big! Personality:Shadowclaw is very social cat she LOVE to talk and loves boys!Also sometime she is mean,very bad.Mostly nice...whlie if your nice to her.Shadowclaw likes to now every thing!Like what is going around her and what is going on.
History:Shadowclaw was born during the day,and her mom died 3 day after she was born.Her dad found someone else and had a brother that she hates,and is so dumb!So dumb he could not walk 1 mile to save his life.
IC Example:There was a stirring in the shadow,and from all around lithe drak shape crept stealthily over the rocks.Unsheathed claws glinted in the moonlight.Wary eyes flashed like amber.And then,as if on a silent signal,the creatures leaped at each other,and suddenly the rocks were alive with wrestling,screeching cats.
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Post by Lightstar on May 1, 2007 19:19:00 GMT -5
ehm.....first of, your cats name can't be shadow. Maybe Shadowclaw or somethin, and second, medicine cat i already taken in SC
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Post by Rowanstar on May 2, 2007 22:26:19 GMT -5
Okay, so I've got a few things to say about this bio:
1) Please use the correct bio format
2) As Lightstar said, Shadow is not a true warrior name. And the medicine cat rank is taken. Look at the ShadowClan status to find out which ones aren't taken.
3) Make the appearence and personaltiy WAY more descriptive. You can also get a picture. If you follow the format, you will see that you need a personaltiy, appearence, history and a role play example.
Sorry for being a butt, but this bio needs some work. I'll accept when it's fixed up a bit, mkay? Thanks!
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Post by shadow on May 19, 2007 14:34:08 GMT -5
There now can some one see the BIO!
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Post by Lightstar on May 24, 2007 16:24:15 GMT -5
Ok Shadow, since rowan is in Qubec, I'm in charge of SC for now, so, if you want to be deputy, please repost this in the deputy tryouts thread. Thank you,
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Post by shadow on May 24, 2007 17:42:08 GMT -5
Okay!
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Post by Rowanstar on May 26, 2007 14:06:47 GMT -5
THANKS LIGHTY! I knew I could trust you! As Lighty said, you can post your tryout in the Deputy Tryouts thread! KAY THANKS! I wish you luck! He's Accepted as a warrior, if not deputy! Thank you for modifying it, Shadow! I hate telling people what to do, it makes me feel bad... SORRY!
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